I like your kinstuck, but I feel like you’re forgetting the vital fact that most of the characters you’ve done are violently racist, in, you know, the canon. Otherwise, not bad, definitely nailed Meenah and Eridan (again minus the murderous tendencies). Maybe classism instead of racism, what with your spot on portrayal of their translated wealth and social status?

phemiec:

Yeah I’ve translated Blood Colour to class/wealth. Because translating it as race would have had the potential to be very tricky and potentially problematic. Also, not fun for me, and stressful.

There’s lots of problematic stuff in homestuck canon…and I don’t particularly want to keep those of canon parts in my AU. :

Wait if tav has pokemon cards and those things, does he have all the plushies even vintage!!!! :) :)

phemiec:

He has a huge amount of merch and his bedroom literally looks like a little kids bedroom with all the plushies and videogame stuff and a mewtwo bedspread and and poke ball nightlight…not to mention all the anime and peter pan posters. He also has a lot of artwork of fairies in fantasy settings on his walls cause he thinks they’re just really pretty (his first crush was Tinkerbell, to no-one’s surprise, I’m sure). :>