made tiny CBPUS edits

micronecro:

Went back to comb through the story to add a bit more clarification that while it’s plot-important that quirks used to be described differently, Izuku’s assumptions that there’s a certain way of referring to them is false all the way to chapter 5, and he’s been totally freeballing how to refer to contradictions to these outdated systems until that point.

Also, slimmed down a bit of the scientific terminology Izuku tries to use. I didn’t bother removing the complex concepts, but I clipped the wording a bit so it’s more obvious that Izuku is explaining a conclusion he’s drawn – the way they were written before felt kinda pointless and meandering.

Also Also, added a bit more direction towards Izuku’s rant in chapter 6 – Izuku is trying to parse his issues with Kacchan and his self-image, but Todoroki is taking it – well, like he took it in canon, “a hero owes it to others to use the best of his abilities”. The punchline that he completely misinterpreted Izuku to have altruistic motivations instead of a need to take out his inferiority complex on the first open ear he can get his hands on didn’t deliver as well as I liked.

Most of this is just redoing pacing and word choice, nothing noticeable, just useful in guiding the reader a bit easier since I got 1 or 2 complaints (and I was having a hard time following my own logic.)